tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1953627050807350486.post7725364033471524801..comments2023-12-23T21:57:14.757-05:00Comments on Write On!: The Basics: Dorky DialogueAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1953627050807350486.post-24137229682338418532011-03-27T13:08:13.665-04:002011-03-27T13:08:13.665-04:00Anjie -- That would be awesome! If you'll just...Anjie -- That would be awesome! If you'll just include the blog info for your students, I'd appreciate it.Authoresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1953627050807350486.post-58194883440324319612011-03-27T10:29:24.873-04:002011-03-27T10:29:24.873-04:00This is a great crash course in dialogue for both ...This is a great crash course in dialogue for both young and not-so-young writers. May I use this as an example with my students? I am facilitating a teen writing workshop this summer.<br />Thanks!<br />AnjieAnjie Kokanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13685649694735596952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1953627050807350486.post-89562653147916403522011-03-22T18:46:56.303-04:002011-03-22T18:46:56.303-04:00Lol Mr. A! Thank you for doing these Authoress, th...Lol Mr. A! Thank you for doing these Authoress, they help a lot!Sarahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1953627050807350486.post-20655479500014626152011-03-22T15:15:15.493-04:002011-03-22T15:15:15.493-04:00Why, Mr. A! YOU'RE EXACTLY RIGHT!! <3Why, Mr. A! YOU'RE EXACTLY RIGHT!! <3Authoresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1953627050807350486.post-36314330154833583792011-03-22T15:13:58.064-04:002011-03-22T15:13:58.064-04:00Try to limit the use of the word "strangled&q...Try to limit the use of the word "strangled"<br /><br />Like "strangled stomach, strangled voice, strangled sound"<br /><br />As far as<br /><br />"Strange, for silence so long unbroken to be disturbed twice in succession."<br /><br />I have figured it out finally.<br /><br />"It was strange that there was a long period of silence that was suddenly broken twice in a row."<br /><br />:-)Mr A.noreply@blogger.com